According to my editor it is grammatically correct. Can you pin point?
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Anonymous09/15/13
You write from two different perspectives. Originally, you wrote it as a narrative, speaking as an omnipotent narrator. Then you changed perspective to first-person from the perspective of Ian. I think the first commenter just wants you to pick one specific way to tell the story.
English
Nice change in stories
... But please, please please, learn grammar. Or find an editor.
Reference my story
According to my editor it is grammatically correct. Can you pin point?
You write from two different perspectives. Originally, you wrote it as a narrative, speaking as an omnipotent narrator. Then you changed perspective to first-person from the perspective of Ian. I think the first commenter just wants you to pick one specific way to tell the story.
I see what you mean
Thanks, I see what you mean. Will work on it next time. The thing is I mainly do articles.
Best Alex.
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