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Longing and Belonging

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by GaryArl05/12/16

Took me a second reading to fully understand

but once I grasped the meaning of the "little black marks", I enjoyed the oblique way you approached your theme. As your prose makes clear, you're a fine wordsmith, though with this one, you could tighten up the melody and rhythm just a bit. Not as good as "Tempest Done", but still enjoyable.

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