All Comments on 'The Shaved Slave Ch. 02'

by jPhoenix

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Less_IsbetterLess_Isbetterover 10 years ago
The Adventure Continues

Nice follow up part 2. I like where you seem to be headed with this. I'm still curios why she clippered herself before she got to the bar. Not to tell you how to write your story, but perhaps a chapter from her point of view from her decision to shave, through the bar and then home with the guy. Keep writing, please, and thank you for sharing.

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