8 Days: Day 8+ - FTDS

I can settle for 'everyone lives happily ever after'...

...rather than a 'reconciliation at all costs.'

don't finish any other stories after this

this serie told us you have waned into a WACC and RACC writer.

I don't know what a "WACC and RACC writer" is (from previous comment), but it sounded derogatory - if it was, I couldn't disagree more, I loved every chapter.

Thank you.

I think that you are doing fine...

Taking unfinished stories and putting your own ending to them is good,to me at least.
You did a good job with 8 Days. While I hope you keep working on finishing unfinished stories,consider writing one that is all yours.

I'm pretty sure I'll like it.

No Suing

At least he found someone to take his mind off of his Troubles. and who knows he will never Make another"Deal"

Fun...

...if ridiculous story. The way you morphed the circumstances of both characters was really quite fluid. The ending wasn't what I wanted when I started the story, but by the end it actually made sense. This definitely was not a RACC story as another reader called it.

The the other one asking about WACC and RACC. RACC is Reconcile at All Costs Cuckold. WACC is Wimp at All Costs Cuckold. Comes from familiar, if disturbing, story patterns in the Loving Wives catagory.

Good imagination

I felt you did a great job of finishing the story. It was interesting watching the direction the story went. Personally, I prefer happy endings and I think Damon was smart to go with Nikki. Keep writing. Not sure if you use an editor or not, but I also appreciate not being distracted with too many spelling or grammatical mistakes, as I sometimes see.

Liked it.

Wasn't expecting that, but found the entire solution quite satisfying. I thought Lacey was going to win out overall. Key line that made it work for me was the discussion with bff, where he said his fiancée wasn't his best friend.

Happily ever after isn't always a bad ending.

Great...

Really like how you capture the original and give it life!!! I've enjoyed all of your finishes todate and agree it doesn't have to end with BTB. That said, it makes sense to provide comeuppance where appropriate. Look forward to your next submission. Ta very much.

Relief

So pleased that Lacey didn't get trapped with this asshole!

Good job

Nice fun tale of multiple ladies for our hero albeit a wee bit too unlikely that the entire list of his fiances girlfriends want to bed him... But thats ok, it counterbalances all the retarded gay cuck fiction in LW category. Especially liked the whooping given to stripper boy, made me feel all warm and fuzzy!

One star end to a two star story

I'm not bothered by the fact this wasn't a btb story afterall our "hero" was alittle bitch so that didn't matter in the slightest no my problem was how he handled the stripper. Although he was undoubtly a worthless turd of a human being the fact that Damon needed two friends one of which was armed with a taser to talk with a one legged man who spent a week in hospital and only got out that day makes him the biggest pussy/coward to appear on this website. Also he tells him who he is so what does he think will happen that he'll take his beating and then disappear fuck no give it a few months to heal and then Damon will wake in the middle of the night to find his flat is burning down around him.
Unbeleavable stupid shit.

Good job

He finished the damn story...finally

Damn good story

Gave all chapters a 5 once I finished. Very good with making the complexities clear and interesting enough to keep reading. You are one hell of a writer! I did something stupid by changing my email address on my profile and I have been locked out of it. That's why I'm commenting as Anonymous. I'm "Claud137" and 2 of my stories are continuations of other authors works as well. I look forward to others you write in the future. Bravo!

Great Finish

I agree and somewhat of a surprise ending based on other FTDS stories. Was hoping for a Lacey reconcillation, but it all ties. Too often the stories turn to a scortched earth theme. Looking for more happy ever after.
Good job!

You where wrong to touch this story

While I can sympathize with the idea of continuing abandoned stories, this is frankly insulting. If you felt the story should have ended this way, then you should have just written an original story. Judging from the way you continued it, I dought you would have liked it had DamonX continued it. damonx's stories are centered around the fetish, humiliation and sexual excitement that results from cheating. It's not about being a wimp or cuckold, his stories are ironic fantasies. You should have just changed the characters entirely and said it was inspired by the original. Your character is such an insecure douche bag, and on top of that you end it with him hooking up with the ugly girl next door. Oh, and what's this a double standard! Now he's the rolling around with two women? This is nothing but hetero wish fulfillment bullshit. You failed your stated goal and ended up writing a story about a wimp anyway.

finally a finished story

finally theres a finished story not a year long to be continuesd bull crap. different ending but thats real life sometimes. the girl next door is ur mate sometimes. @specre at least damonx had the fucking nuts to finish the story if you don't like it then why did you keep reading it? If you want it different then write your own story be greatlful someone at least ended it you bloody git!

GREAT

wonderfully written loved the interplay of the group nice ending.

Personally, I think we saw too little of Nikki to accept her as the best choice, or replacement, if you will. But that's my only problem with the story.

If I were in the place of the protagonist, I would've been okay eventually with taking Lacey back and slowly building a new foundation for the future. It wouldn't have been without pain and it would have needed lots of patience from both sides, but it could have been better, because both parts of the couple would've been tested before their wedding and would have learned something for their future life together.

Loved it

The quality of your writing is exceptional. Plot and character development amazing. I was thinking reconciliation, but don't have a major problem with the outcome. After hearing all the details, I am not sure why he would leave her if he loved her. Once she was initially drugged, all bets were off.

The picture painted of Lacey just didn't mesh with what we heard about her from others (I.e. Jenna and Nikki). You did not depict her as conniving and manipulative. If anything, the whole event must have significantly changed her. She was sincere, remorseful, and determined to do things right after her mistake.

The most glaring problem was how he was able to forgive his friend, who was the reason Lacey was drugged and raped (let's face it, that is exactly what happened to her). And then he continues an intimate relationship with her? And he wasn't able to mend things with Lacey? Hard to swallow. Cale seemed more upset about what happened to Lacey than did her fiancée.

The one thing that sticks in my craw is her own reaction to her friends drugging her. She was not outraged.

Five stars and an instant favorite of mine. You took a shit story and made it a thing of beauty.

Brilliant

Had me worried in the middle but overall a 5

I was afraid you were going to put him with Lacey in the end.

I thought the last time he was with Nikki before the cruise that they might end up together. Lacey might not have been quite as bad as she first seemed but was not nearly as good as she should have been. A good ending. Favorite story.

Great Job

I'm not a writer just a reader and I loved it, great ending had me wondering till the end.

Never read the first story but was able to get the gist of it. Don't care how the author ended his because I can't imagine a more perfect ending than this. You are an exceptional writer and I loved how you handled all the details of this story. It would have been very easy to keep the 'rich' girls total bitches and the 'hero' a whiny, angry complainer. You resisted and wove a fascinating tale. Very well done

Wonderful!

Loved it. Long read and time well spent. Thanks

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Nice

You had me wondering for a few seconds there but you let or hero get away from Lacey. Excellent sequel. What are the extra chapters for? I guess I'll check it out.

Second time I have read this FINE story, was not sure until the last that I had.

I have read several of your other stories, this one was the best. I was afraid that you were going to write Lacey back into the winning spot, thank you for not doing so. She was a lying, skanky, cheap, spoiled, rich bitch and did not deserve anything good but she did try to make up for it despite continuing to lie. The ending was really good in my estimation (and I am usually opposed to endings that let the bitch come out well). Thank you for bringing this to us. I'm an old man, somewhat perverted and have discriminating taste (if I do say so myself).

Congrats.

A mighty fine job.

a rare talent indeed.

i rarely ( if ever ) agree with the way you Finish the Damn Stories .
However , i salute your writing skill & willingness to bring closure to some awkward tales .

Thankyou (unreservedly) for making this site a much better place for all of us to Enjoy.

xxxhugsxxx

Loved the story

Hated the ending. It should have been Lacey. It would have just felt right that way. This way seemed like things were going to be OK after Lacey was set up by everyone. I guess he wasn't a big enough man to accept that she had been screwed over by just about everyone they knew.

*****

No pig and no poke. Nicely done.

I read damons story and was disappointed that he didn't continue it. I found yours and read the whole thing today. Well done. Lots of twists and turns. Lots of opportunities to go in different directions with different women. I think it turned out well. You satisfied this old man. I'm going to have to read more of your stories.

Thank You.

Thank you for a fantastic story. Fortunately I read it in one sitting and didn't have to wait in a series which was clearly a "page turner" for lack of a better term. The waiting wold have driven me crazy.

I was sooooo happy that he didn't end end with Lacey but I'm nevertheless pleased at how her character rebounded.

All in all, fantastic story. Thank you for writing it. It was a privilege to read.

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Another trick ending 1*. Pretty typical for you.

You set the whole scene, the whole romance for reconciliation but invariably twist it at the end just for the sake of a clever ending. Reading the whole tale was thus pointless for me. Why not just break it off that very first night of the deal and get on with his life. The rest was just pointless other than to show what an asshole he was. He forgave Jenna and allowed her into his sex life but not Lacey....

5 you have amazzing endings making readers think and love your stories

fuck you dear annony!!!!

Petered out

It ent on long enough so my need for any more vengeance for Lacey faded aay.
Thanks for not RaaCing them though.

Good one

I liked this story and I am happy for all of them.

You need to search for more stories and make them a good one :)

Right ending

It was obvious that Nikki was the right one. Heart of gold, firecracker in bed.
She could call my Daddy anytime.
Very nice story.

Lacey

I have no problem with him NOT ending up with Lacey.

While she MAY have been to some extent a victim, she did enough wrong on her own to deserve losing her man: the deal itself, the throwing Jenna into the deal after the fact, reneging on the virgin ass part, which was really the only reason he agreed to the deal in the first place, lying about her intent that her ass would be virgin, then killing him over breaking the deal regarding Jenna, which he never really agreed to, and which was now allowed anyway since she broke the deal with Brett taking her ass.

Great continued story

This is one of the most complete endings and a very good conclusion to the original story - Thanks

Second time through

This is a story I originally loved and favorited. Second time through and I see too many flaws. I just find all the characters unlikable and am confused by the ending. This guy was so abused by all these women and should have extricated himself entirely from the situation. Run from them all! Why was there this determination to have him be with one of these women? It was a presupposition of the author that this guy would not be alone. So he chooses the lesser evil? Was she that great?