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Another crap drool
your stories do not appeal anymore-couldn't pass the 3 rating.
can the stories get
any worst, only if you keep writing.
Pathic
No talent, non erotic dog shit stories.
dear anon
If you are going to criticize an author at least spell your heading correctly. Pathic? really? Your spelling is pathetic!
shavali glin usabi moicha ( this story really sucks)
@ rightbank
Pathic is correct, that's how the author(?) spells it.
If you'd rather call it pathetic, I'm with you.
It wasn't that bad.
L F C
Lousy Fucking Crap
okay
did anyone read all 7 chapters???
I find it okay in continuation of the earlier 2 chapters i read
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