This was great! Will it turn into a series?
I see you...yes...you want to read this....yes...you....do it.
Fuck.....I CANT MAKE THIS COUNTER GO PAST 1000!
THIS STORY IS SO ON FIRE, ID LET THIS BURN AND TAKE ANY NAYSAYERS WITH IT!!
Just be careful of the spelling mistakes as they take away from the story. But I could definitely relate to Sam.
Oh wow, loved this. I hope you continue with it, it sounds like there is alot more to tell and a few broken hearts along the way...... Thank you. M.
This story is personal to me - about a past Dom I knew, who also writes stories about me on his Literotica account. These are all fantasy stories for now, and so play a part in our personal series :)
I do have a my real-life experience to upload very soon, however.
I may make a second of this one though :)
And thank you for the comments - very much appreciated!
Guess I shouldn't have read this before bed time....all excited now. Good read!
this was hot and i would love more. i mean wow
A most enjoyable story that really captured the moment. Be careful with your spellings and presentation, though - they deserve to be the very best you can manage to do justice to a story as goos as this. Five stars - I'll overlook the spelling errors!
To talk about spellings mistakes and then to make your own, as I just have, simply goes to show how true Murphy's Law really is.
Very hot and believable.... Please continue
I can't stop reading this story Samantha
I'm so very proud of you
Or is that goos...
Sorry Mel, that did bring a smile to my lips
Well done Sam.
That's you firmly bookmarked.
I don't have any real criticism, somebody already mentioned spelling. That's the only thing that drew me out of your story, and for only a second. I love the pace that this story goes at, and I love when stories end at new beginnings. Thanks for a such a wonderful read
Better than "Cross fire" and better executed than 50 Shades. Great as a stand alone, but hoping for a Novella.
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