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twelveooneover 10 years agoOh
killer lines (good killer) here
On the shining roads
the sky lies belly-up, suffused with leaves,
nice!!!
dull and wet and wide.
5ed
Ashesh9over 10 years agohv to 'gree with 1201 :
"On the shining roads
the sky lies belly-up, suffused with leaves "
is an excellent piece of Poetry !!! 5-ed
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