Your one of my favorites, hope we don't have to wait to long for the next chapter.
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Anonymous09/06/13
MORE PLEASE!!!
I agree with the previous comment---you are my favorite writer on this site---i am a 20 year old Asian female and love all of your stories--i especially love older men too. i never date boys my age....i am happy that this is chapter 1 and also hope that the chapters come soon???
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Anonymous09/10/13
Confused??
Don't get me wrong, it's just that I get confused if things don't seem sensible. Who did she marry? Jason or Chase??
Don't mind if she is screwing both of them but at least proof read your stories...she can't be married to both!
A good story with good repetition about powerful older men, which is just what we need when nearing the end.Its good to see a young woman who has what they want and who is sensible about giving them what they want. She deserves her success and will be rewarded as she carries on. It was good that Chase(Jason) was depicted as being poor sexually although very successful in his career. He will be happy with his success and her as a trophy wife and will make a fine cuckold as he proudly sees his wife delight the old but distinguished men of his profession.
More to come?
Your one of my favorites, hope we don't have to wait to long for the next chapter.
MORE PLEASE!!!
I agree with the previous comment---you are my favorite writer on this site---i am a 20 year old Asian female and love all of your stories--i especially love older men too. i never date boys my age....i am happy that this is chapter 1 and also hope that the chapters come soon???
Confused??
Don't get me wrong, it's just that I get confused if things don't seem sensible. Who did she marry? Jason or Chase??
Don't mind if she is screwing both of them but at least proof read your stories...she can't be married to both!
sorry wrong bytton
sorry I dug the story but i hit wrong button on your score
im not sure how to fix it
A good scaffold
A good story with good repetition about powerful older men, which is just what we need when nearing the end.Its good to see a young woman who has what they want and who is sensible about giving them what they want. She deserves her success and will be rewarded as she carries on. It was good that Chase(Jason) was depicted as being poor sexually although very successful in his career. He will be happy with his success and her as a trophy wife and will make a fine cuckold as he proudly sees his wife delight the old but distinguished men of his profession.
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