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by Kalrissa09/06/13

Interesting premise.

It'd be interesting to see more, hopefully have you explain some of the tag. Please however, less italics?

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by Anonymous09/08/13

Interesting

I like the idea of a more scientific view of a succubus. However, this is an erotica site, so people are expecting to see the hot & sweaty part of the plot as well.

Also, dialogue does not need to be italicized. Italics usually denote a characters personal thoughts rather than external dialogue, which made the reading a bit confusion.

The story has great potential though and I hope you continue it.

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by Wolfblackthorne09/09/13

nice

intersting take on the succubus. looking forward to seeing more. The dialogue was a bit hard to follow but tje plot and story madeit bearable. looking forward to more. good work>

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