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The Wine Offering

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by greenmountaineer09/01/13

This is wonderful. It felt like a dance between two lovers intertwined. My only quibble is

"I bathe my sweet lover in wine
and offer her to Dionysus
who will take her to Zeus for he will"

would have sounded more like music to me.

Wonderful poem!

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