Hey there I liked the story It wasn't like some that make out both people are some sort of sexy demi-gods I enjoyed the descriptions and I was enthralled and a little aroused Keep writing I enjoyed it
Nice story. Characters seem like ordinary people , just like most of us. Please continue to write about your adventures.
I really liked this story. The characters seemed very real. She didn't blame what happened on her husband because he worked too much or that he loved her too little. They both just sort of let this relationship evolve over time. I would really like to read a chapter 2 about these people. Keep writing, you have got talent. Jeff
Excellent story, well told. I especially enjoy your female viewpoint, matter of fact but detailed, exactly what I'd expect from a nurse. Keep writing
Loved it!
It could of been better if longer
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Hi
Hey there
I liked the story
It wasn't like some that make out both people are some sort of sexy demi-gods
I enjoyed the descriptions and I was enthralled and a little aroused
Keep writing I enjoyed it
It feels real!
Nice story. Characters seem like ordinary people , just like most of us. Please continue to write about your adventures.
Bravo Well Done
I really liked this story. The characters seemed very real.
She didn't blame what happened on her husband because he worked too much or that he loved her too little.
They both just sort of let this relationship evolve over time. I would really like to read a chapter 2 about these people.
Keep writing, you have got talent.
Jeff
I liked both this one and the anal story. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Excellent story, well told. I especially enjoy your female viewpoint, matter of fact but detailed, exactly what I'd expect from a nurse.
Keep writing
Loved it!
nice story
It could of been better if longer
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