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Genie Chronicles - Gemini Ch. 04

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by Anonymous09/09/13

Fun--genie theme with fun variation

Good start. Hoping to see good character development. Thank you.

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by Anonymous09/09/13

Nice world and

I am loving the pace you are printing these at.

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