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erotic plus "intent!"
You've made it even better!
The wordplay is excellent and I can't even find anything to nitpick. xo
god
I have to quit reading porn/poetry. Like everything thing you do, it is right on the line. Yes it is poetry, and really great opener here in S1, where does it falter? Damned, if I know.
Mmm...I love how both lovers are so vividly displayed, yet left open to the reader's imagination. "Separating, satisfied," is just so right.
This is great.
Awesome imagery, language, invocation of senses. 5 stars if I could vote.
Tessss
This sizzles! Love the tear drop image on the nips. ^^
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