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Good story but...
Great story but Amber took off her thong twice in this story
Liked it
...and grew some pubic hair
Thanks
Thanks for the feedback. My dislike of proofreading shows through I guess. There'll be more coming, and hopefully with less continuity errors this time.
Well done
Excellent story, nice basis for a continuing theme and a descent into complete submission.
Why thank you Magnus. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Please, sir
post more.
Her thong....
...was taken off twice. Good story but watch out for those errors.
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