A dream come true. My cousin and I always sat together and all that, but had too many younger siblings to make a situation like that even thinkable.
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Anonymous09/09/13
good so far
a little rushed but good just don't leave us hanging like the other 90% of the wannabe writers here do. IF you continue (and you better continue soon) remember to keep it realistic and remember "KISS- KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID". keep it to just the two of them no one else especially no outsiders and keep them together forever.
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Anonymous03/05/14
unfinished again
seems we got another wanna be hack on our hands. he writes a decent story but then FAILS to finish it. i wish the usless webmasters would start kicking these idiots in the ass and make them either finish the story or find a ghost writer to finish it for them. if all else fails DELETE the waste of space.
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a quick end. :(
is there a part two? :)
:)
Awesome hope you keep writing
Fantastic!
A dream come true. My cousin and I always sat together and all that, but had too many younger siblings to make a situation like that even thinkable.
good so far
a little rushed but good just don't leave us hanging like the other 90% of the wannabe writers here do. IF you continue (and you better continue soon) remember to keep it realistic and remember "KISS- KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID". keep it to just the two of them no one else especially no outsiders and keep them together forever.
unfinished again
seems we got another wanna be hack on our hands. he writes a decent story but then FAILS to finish it. i wish the usless webmasters would start kicking these idiots in the ass and make them either finish the story or find a ghost writer to finish it for them. if all else fails DELETE the waste of space.
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