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by Anonymous

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by erectus12309/02/13

well

done, last three words might be eliminated but nicely descriptive and erotic

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by Ashesh909/02/13

I could feel his thumbs against my ass cheeks : hands gripped my hips large , wide & firm:

Blushin' a bit , i felt it ........ Nice lines in ur prose poetry !

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by todski2809/03/13

glad I had time to pop over

and look at the new poems, some nice work here,
sexy, I like the way you portrayed the scene here. agree with Erectus, ;last three words detract from the piece

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