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A Gentleman on a Train

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by Anonymous09/08/13

My wife got fucked and knocked up on a train by a Black guy

This sort of thing must happen more than people think. My wife is knocked up now and this happen on the train on her way home from work. I guess the guy had a great big cock and shot his load deep inside her.

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by Anonymous09/11/13

As usual...you wrote a delightful story

I've now read all of your stories. What a clever imagination you have!

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by Anonymous09/13/13

A new level of creativity!!

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by mel2609/29/13

I Hope to walk into a guy like this! This is one crazy hot story I loved it!

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by ChrisTor2210/17/13

We KNOW she is going to sit down AGAIN!! LOL

This time though, it can't be written as non-consensual!! Amazing how 'sensitive she is here...no breast contact, no fondling of her bottom (or even any mention of either) but total focus on her wet and receptive core.....well written....although YOU might be responsible for an increase in the birth rates!! LOL

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by Anonymous02/24/14

I've always wanted something like this to happen to me.....
Immensely enjoyed this story.

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by Anonymous02/25/14

@mel26

Tell us which trains you get on and maybe someone will meet you there?

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by sopharoones04/17/14

aaah trains my weakness!

i have such a thing for asian groping porn on trains, this is the second story along those lines ive found tonight! yay! oh and i only just commented on another of your stories before this so you have my attention now. reading onwards!

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by Anonymous04/20/14

Perfect

You wrote the story so smoothly it didn't even feel like rape. Bravo!

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by Anonymous05/06/14

Excellent

Believe me you are one of the better writers on this website. i am going to read all your stories

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by Anonymous08/11/14

loved it!

Very well written and as another person said it was so smooth you forget its rape. My knly complaint is its too short :)

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by Diannah10/05/14

5 stars

Perfect! Original take on an old theme, done without a flaw.

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by tabbymidnite10/30/14

What a train ride

Guess that can happen. No trains in the country.................... :(

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by Anonymous02/11/15

Great story

And technically since she didn't say no it wasn't actually rape

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by Anonymous02/27/15

well done!

enjoyed reading it :-)

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by Anonymous03/06/15

I hate that Japanese train crap, but I liked this.

Stupid girl mentality. Its like would you rather get raped or be embarrassed? (in front of people you probly won't ever see again lol)

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