All Comments on 'A Gentleman on a Train'

This sort of thing must happen more than people think. My wife is knocked up now and this happen on the train on her way home from work. I guess the guy had a great big cock and shot his load deep inside her.

I've now read all of your stories. What a clever imagination you have!

A new level of creativity!!

I Hope to walk into a guy like this! This is one crazy hot story I loved it!

This time though, it can't be written as non-consensual!! Amazing how 'sensitive she is here...no breast contact, no fondling of her bottom (or even any mention of either) but total focus on her wet and receptive core.....well written....although YOU might be responsible for an increase in the birth rates!! LOL

I've always wanted something like this to happen to me.....

Immensely enjoyed this story.

Tell us which trains you get on and maybe someone will meet you there?

i have such a thing for asian groping porn on trains, this is the second story along those lines ive found tonight! yay! oh and i only just commented on another of your stories before this so you have my attention now. reading onwards!

You wrote the story so smoothly it didn't even feel like rape. Bravo!

Believe me you are one of the better writers on this website. i am going to read all your stories

Very well written and as another person said it was so smooth you forget its rape. My knly complaint is its too short :)

Perfect! Original take on an old theme, done without a flaw.

Guess that can happen. No trains in the country.................... :(

And technically since she didn't say no it wasn't actually rape

enjoyed reading it :-)

I hate that Japanese train crap, but I liked this.

Stupid girl mentality. Its like would you rather get raped or be embarrassed? (in front of people you probly won't ever see again lol)

I am hoping that this will happen to me soon with a young sexy girl sat on my lap.great story

This is one of those stories I just can't get out of my head.

Mind-boggling situation! And I chuckled through all of it!!!

What a "nice" situation

I wouldn't mind this happening to me

Thank you for this fun story. Short and sweet and quite up my alley.

I would like this to happen to me. Except I hope for fondling or groping of my breasts too. Perhaps another rider notices and 'helps'. I do so enjoy non-consent stories.

~~Bettyboobs30

So hot, I would love to be taken like this. A bareback cock slipping in and cumming in me when there's no other option. Please tell me more, I need more.

You've got quite a realistic situation here, except her orgasms anyway. Women not wanting to make a fuss, no one would believe them, and so they put up with assholes like this train guy :/ The orgasms really ruined it though.

(a) Was she a Virgin- did not seem so but not made clear!

(b) Was she married or just a slut who screwed anything that moved?

(c) Did she get pregnant or on the Pill?

What a lovely thought

Certainly made me very hard

I've read plenty of erotica and written some of my own. That's not unwanted, it's gratuitous and that's rape in anyone's book.

I've ridden a lot of Japanese commuter trains, and you really captured the feel of it. I've fallen into people's laps before because when you get near the row of seats your torso gets pushed and your feet have nowhere to go, and it can be hard to stand back up. You learn to avoid the seats, I always tried to stay near the walls just inside the doors. So that part felt very realistic. I just wish I'd experienced the rest of it! ;)

Who would have thought that such things could happen?

Loved it!

I enjoyed the story. It was quite funny and though not completely realistic in every aspect it was so cute and just funny! 3 to 1 was the clincher! That is just so sarcastic. Love it.

Oh, sorry, I wrote a train story myself and I've ridden a commuter train over 1000 times myself medium distance. Sometimes there is standing room only, but never have I seen anything even remotely like this. I have seen teenagers making out on seat next to me! The girl smiled at me and I smiled back.

Most of the people who favour the rape and violation in this story are anonymous readers. This story was not arousing to me and actually impossible to believe that two people could have and enjoy sex under these conditions.

Robertodavo a.k.a Robert Davidson.

No clue why a reader would apply reality to erotic fiction. Can't say I've read too many stories where I've felt the scenario was terribly likely lol!

I enjoyed the "to embarassed to call attention to the behaviour" quandary that kept the heroine immobile. Delicious!

Kudos to the chap for managing to hold a paper up, pull himself out, and tease a girl in his lap all at once!

I'm a newby here. I read erotica for fun, relaxation, and to examine the writing techniques of other authors.

This story was fun and the short format worked well. It kept me entertained and smiling throughout. Keep them coming. You have an audience because you have talent.

This is exactly what I was looking for, thank you! It was playful and just the right level of non consent I fantasize about.

Thanks!

It seemed like no Gentleman to me, but it made for a good humorous story and very surprised to read the comments and how many females wished it was them! I can only imagine the swaying and continuous movement we all experience on a train gives rise to the female traveler's sexual fantasy. (oh and the author) I think of myself as a Gentleman, however, I could never imagine myself being so lucky.

I'm female and I think "non-consent" is a pretty common fantasy for women. (Please note, I said FANTASY.) I'm always amazed at the number of anonymous readers who rant against stories about rape and how "disgusting" the fantasy is, and yet, CHOOSE to read stories clearly labeled as "non-consent". Why is that? Why not just read some other kind of story? It's not like you aren't forewarned by the category! Please stop virtue-signaling and go read something else. You don't get to decide what other people enjoy and what turns them on.

Great Story, Ashson! And I think a lot of women can identify with not wanting to cause an embarrassing scene.

Agreed with Bamagal, I could see myself not wanting to cause a scene. I'll just leave it at that!!

What a turn on!

I would like this to happen to me. Except I hope for fondling or groping of my breasts too. Perhaps another rider notices and 'helps'. I do so enjoy non-consent stories.

On my Ashton, what a story! I agree with bamagl2, lots of women fantasize about non-consensual situations but truly wouldn't want to actually experience such an event. Isn't it interesting how our minds work.

I LIKED IT!!!

nice!

Hot,Hot,Hot

Just found this story.

A similar thing happened to me, it just happened on a crowded train.

One guy in front and one behind me.

Love your version

This is one of my favourite stories on the website that I come back to again and again. Short and sweet with a bit of humour. You nailed it.

Great story! This type of fantasy has always been a favourite.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

So hot

The writing is very good. I felt everything as I read each work and ended up with a huge orgasm.

for me , it's a winner , I would like sitting on some stranger's lap