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This has to be the best 'best friends get together' story i've read on this site, thank you. I loved it :). Hopefully you'll have quite a few more of these inspirational bursts of yours.. and perhaps not so far apart ;p? Again, thank you for this wonderful read. Made my afternoon.
x, F.W.
Love it...
I hope you stick with this story to the end...... Really enjoying it and loving the characters:)
Excellent..
Soo Amazing. I hope you write another chapter, or more, soon.
Ps. I love Kate Beckett too, she's so Fucking sexy. ;) I'm already gay for her. :p lol
Keep writing!
You HAVE to finish this story!
god ur such a...
TEASEEEEEEE
There's no way
you can go on with life without finishing the rest of this! Seriously, one of the best 'best friends' stories I've read on here in a looooonnnngggg time. Please keep it up? I love what you're doing here...
please
please write more I can honestly see this story with many parts to come!!!!!
You're writing is phenomenal.. can't get enough of it! I really do hope you're aware of your gift (: Thanks for part 2, wouldn't mind an entire series!
PS. Really loved that part you wrote about our chests. Writing some real sht lol. And your humor is on point as well! Love it, thank yooou.
In my dank & fetid imagination which has been a wee bit shortchanged by this tale's brevity ...
The Kate character's has a five letter last name starts with U ends with an n & entails torrid sapphic trysting that twists and turns with power plays & positions that demand Cirque Soleil flexibility. Dee(p) breath.
This was sweet with emphasis on mutual regard & caring.The addictive glib patter which rebounded so effortlessly in original like rubber sphere used in championship handball match was scaled back. Less qualms & more action !
" Thinking is what gets you caught from behind." - O.J. Simpson.
Ah wait. That might not be my best example. Oh what do I know? Just a man. Carry on with when 'Jodie met Miranda ' frolics. Try to put out 2nd sequel before 2015 is all I ask.
wow
Oh my goshness!!!! You are such a tease. I was extremely disappointed when I got to the end of the page and there was no page two. Now you know you have to continue this and make it a series. Please?
This is Wonderful!
Sweet and hot! This is one of the finest "best friends coming together" stories I've seen. Aside from the physicality, the emotional dimension makes this so much richer, and so promising for future chapters. Please keep this going and don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. Thank you!
Fantastic!
Love the slow build up you have going on here, the characters are deep and completely believable. I know that you felt, as did I to a degree, that the first story could hold up on it's own, but you've now opened pandora's box with this second chapter and I think you kind of need to add the third installment. Look forward to it with baited breath and thanks so much for sharing thus far! :)
Same as # 1
I wonder how many chapters I will have to read until something happens between teh two of them. I don't have very much patience.
Job Well Done
Your stories are more than just stories, it is true pieces of art! Continue doing what you do and ignore those who read a real story where the sex is secondary to the tale and complain about it. Your stories drew me in and your characters are believable and real. Can't wait to read the rest, this is bound to be a magnificent series, it already is, actually.
THANKS
Thanks for listening to our pleas for more. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. You are an excellent story teller. Christie P
Worth the Wait
I love the banter and the slowwwwww buildup. Take your time but keep bringing us along when you're ready. I'm willing to wait.
love it
Love the slow bulidup keep on going
Tease!
I love stories like this where you take your time to build the story. A good story leaves me wanting more and this does it in spades. Great writing!
Ohh!
I think i`d go crazy for you bi_cathy it`s been quite awhile for this second installment...nice teasing ehhh.nevertheless you`ve got a nice story.(Cinder)
Amazing!
It amazes me how skillfully you describe two people stepping into utter integrity -- with all the terrors that entails, terrors that get masked behind glib quips. You have painted such a compelling portrait that I genuinely care for these two people and genuinely wish them all the best! And I wish you the same.
Well played.
You write blossoming love and foreplay like no other I have ever seen. It's incredible.
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