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My Mouth Ain't Just for Talkin'

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by Anonymous

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by Savanna709/10/13

Nice dry humor

Some of your dialogue was very witty and I liked how you poked fun and the humor behind it. If I would suggest anything it would be to tighten up your sentence structure a little more to give the humor more punch. Good Story well told, nice idea too.

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by texcaveman09/12/13

AND

her last 2 sentences say it all......

If it ain't broke, don't fix it! Now kiss me.

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