5 For the story this far. I look forward to more
I was kind of disappointed. There was a real good story line going here with sex, and this chapter pretty much went all sex. The story made the sex. The sex did not make the story.
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5 For the story this far. I look forward to more
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I was kind of disappointed. There was a real good story line going here with sex, and this chapter pretty much went all sex.
The story made the sex.
The sex did not make the story.
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