good. but it ended kinda abruptly...
I kinda really liked that. ☺
Loved it. It was fast, hot, intense, erotic, good...did I mention hot? 5stars!
@Adjoaq: You could totally help me with my writing skills sometime, I absolutely love Fiery Heat. :D @Anonymous: It was kinda meant to be a short fling. I thought it'd reach two pages, but it hit only one. I'll try to intensify the detail next time. @Anonymous: Thanks a lot. :D Send all your love to virtuorgasm69@hotmail.com
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what happened?
good. but it ended kinda abruptly...
Yeah
I kinda really liked that. ☺
Hot!
Loved it. It was fast, hot, intense, erotic, good...did I mention hot? 5stars!
Thanks a bunch
@Adjoaq: You could totally help me with my writing skills sometime, I absolutely love Fiery Heat. :D
@Anonymous: It was kinda meant to be a short fling. I thought it'd reach two pages, but it hit only one. I'll try to intensify the detail next time.
@Anonymous: Thanks a lot. :D Send all your love to virtuorgasm69@hotmail.com
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