I really loved the story and the girls and Annie is so cute and so sexy to lets see more of the girls and annie i loved them.
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
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Anonymous12/04/07
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Excellent writing, by far, but you should have put more detail into what they were doing, not just "I came several times". You should tell us about the orgasm, was she moaning or was she silent? Bucking or still? And for goodness' sake, don't build up to Rachel like that just for a lousy game of chicken! I think the sequel (please?) will be perfect.
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Anonymous06/28/08
Mmm, yeah!
More please! This is a great START for a wonderful series of tales, I cannot wait 2 read what happened between you and little Rachel, either!
OMG, OMG, OMG! Please continue this story, Pretty please.
Your writing is superb, like your characters & their situations!
C'Mon, be a sport, huh?
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wow!
please finish the story.
amazing
this story made me rethink my sexual encounters for life....i love you! :)
Very Hot!
Very hot story hope theres another chapter cumming
Good story so far but seems unfinished
That can't be the end of the story! LOL....what ultimately happened when the 4 of you got together?
A sexy story
I really loved the story and the girls and Annie is so cute and so sexy to lets see more of the girls and annie i loved them.
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
More Details
Excellent writing, by far, but you should have put more detail into what they were doing, not just "I came several times". You should tell us about the orgasm, was she moaning or was she silent? Bucking or still? And for goodness' sake, don't build up to Rachel like that just for a lousy game of chicken! I think the sequel (please?) will be perfect.
Mmm, yeah!
More please! This is a great START for a wonderful series of tales, I cannot wait 2 read what happened between you and little Rachel, either!
OMG, OMG, OMG! Please continue this story, Pretty please.
Your writing is superb, like your characters & their situations!
C'Mon, be a sport, huh?
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