Adulterous Honeymoon

Just amasing

It took me three days to read this, I enjoyed every minute, thanks for a fantastic story ,,

Falling into degeneracy

... should not be so easy! It is amazing how well you made each little step seem so easy and setting up the next step. Excellent job. Probably would have been an easier read if each day had been its own chapter (took me over 1 week to read from end to end), but all in all very well done. Absolutely loved it! Looking forward to reading more of your material.

Fantastic story!

I really enjoyed this story, and I was hard for most of the chapters.
Thanks for a very good read!
Joe

Ouch ! Wow, ...

I about flogged my cock off reading this story. Nice buildup. 5*

great!

great story, well written, but so long in detail

Awesome!

Amazing story. Very well written. I always like stories of an innocent wife gets seduced. I believe the journey to sex is as interesting, if not more so, as the sex itself. Thank you for giving me the reader so much pleasure.

Love the emotional buildup

You are an excellent writer. Your description of the emotional and gradual development is very good. An exciting story well told.

A bit too far?

I take the husbands view in these stories. I understand his enjoyment of the wifes gradually overcoming inhibitions, opening up to new pleasures and discovering her sensuality. I totally understand his loving of watching her extreme pleasure. This is so well described in this well written and exciting story.

But I would be grossed out by her eating faeces from her lovers penis, the lover peeing in her mouth. And I would never encourage a situation where she would be filmed and photographed by strangers. Big risk of this documentation winding up on the internet. Do she really want aunt Agatha to find out what happened in Belize?

25 PAGE STORY !?!

Some of us search stories by phrases we like. When you get several phrases all in one story - you check it out. But a 25 page story is like the author telling you - ok have fun I dare you to find it!! How sweet. And your lack of paragraphs even makes reading difficult. This might be a fine story but I think the author has virtually no consideration for the reader and makes it most difficult to read.

Great!

This story unfolded slowly and kept me interested all the way. Thanks.

As well written, and thought out, story as I have read online or in magazine format.

Bloody good.

very bloody good. 6 stars

Garbage

Glad to give this pile of garbage the 1*** it deserved....

5*'s

I loved this story. I was very similar to how my beautiful wife and I evolved into our relationship. We went through many of the same adventures and in time we discovered just how much of an exhibitionist my wife is. Now all of our vacations center around where and how we can show her off and possibly get some strange cock.

25 pages

25 pages of crap......

25 pages? Would it never end???

The initial story line was a hot idea, but then it went completely off the rails! Too long of a build up to a poorly written "climax"!
The story after that just dragged on into the depths of stupidity! I would imagine in real life you are a person who likes to hear himself talk?