All Comments on 'Aileen Ch. 01'

cute story and quite well written , i hope you continue with more soon,x

A very sincere story. Often a small event brings about big changes. Many guys dress up in private but need encouragement to do so in public.

i hope you continue to write, the second thing i did was seach the author index looking for more of your stories, hope to find another soon

...Right to the end, thank you for sharing your fantasy Tiffy, and I'll be looking for more from you and I just adored the little bzzt 8yo story at the end <3

Hope you continue to write.

pls more i love to see whare this is going itsstarting to hot up mmmmm ty leann

Wow Tiffany, great story. Hope to read more from you. I would love knowing you and hearing more about you, You are living the dream, good luvk and best wishes for a long happy life. If I weren't so much older I would find you and sweep you off your feet.

Thanks everyone for all of the positive feedback. As a result, I am now putting the last touches on the final draft of Chapter 02! This time I am getting it a bit more organized as this was just a quickly thrown together story. I'm also going to separate the dream sequence a little bit better next time.

I really enjoyed your tale and hope you continue with more chapters soon!

to bad there is not a second chapter