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by Ashesh909/04/13

as Readers we really can't modify the condition we're in----

but readin' this poem made us sit'n grin
the fable should read Wages of Sin
but if one thinks with his "coq " , he really can't win !!

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by LesseloovesPeter09/04/13

The first thing they tell you in affair school is he'll never leave his wife for you...but not every man fits the mold... sounds like you've got a good head a top your shoulders, good for thinking and stuff...

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