Bait a Hook Ch. 08

Longer chapters please!!!

If its all already written why the short chapter? Surely you could add 2 together?

Please

Longer Chapters please

Well done, sweet chapter...I love how open and honest these two are with each other. It was a sweet chapter (depsite the puking haha)...how he took care of
Bobby. Sweet how mom handled things too. I'm surprised they'd kiss out by the water where dad may find out sooner rather than later. Wonder how he'll take it? I am thinking maybe Katie knows what is up too? Should be interesting to see if these two decide to come out. I'd think they'd only do it together since one doing so would risk outing the other given the time they share together. I'd be interested in whether Rob could tell 'us' how the town would take it. Are they very homophobic like some small towns can be? Look forward to more of their story..
cannd

Wow!

You have a beautiful story about two guys failing gradually into a deep love. The way Rob takes care of Bobby is just perfect -- truly a caring and loving companion-like manner. They have grown so much in their devotion to each other, and their sexual connections are so gentle and warm. Rob continues to be a really sexy young man with the beautiful sculpted chest hair and rock-hard abs; and no doubt his cock is rigid whenever he's around Bobby. That rigid 8-inch cock springing from hairy pubes just screams for attention from Bobby. I really loved their declarations of love on the dock, and their gentle kisses. Give these two lovers and young men more chapters. I'm looking forward to their growing more deeply in love.

Great story.

Am loving this story and look forward to each installment as you post it. I don't mind the short chapters at all. Keep up the great writing.

Fizzled Fireworks

Chapter starts off very erotic. However, not a great idea towards the end. A big NO to barfing. Overall I still liked the direction of the story.

LIKING IT

I like how the guys have been working up to this, and his mother is just the best