by desertslave
Many girls get with friends brother and vice versa. It is good to have first time with someone you know.
It's good (and more realistic) the way you're writing this.
A very nice, sweet and well written story about two young people learning about each other and the pleasures they can give and receive. Well above the usual first time stories found here.
Thank you.
"His fingers explored down, around the opening of my vagina...brushing with a fingernail before sliding in slowly. My hips jerked up involuntarily, until he bumped something that hurt"
Learn where the fucking hymen is! The hymen is AT THE OPENING you idiot! not something he bumps into when his finger or dick is already inside! FUCK ME what is it with the stupid writers on this site not knowing a fucking thing about female anatomy! 1*
Hi, desertslave here. I AM female, and remember my youthful sexual activities quite well. I was actively fingered (and even used small tampons) before actually "losing my virginity." If you do ANY actual research on the subject, you might learn that the hymen's structure is variable among women, and may attach nearly externally OR be set within the vagina somewhat. As girls reach puberty it also becomes thinner and more elastic so that marginal penetration is quite possible. I looked around the web for something in simple terms. Hope this helps clear things up: http://www.yourtango.com/201172815/7-things-you-didnt-know-about-hymen
... effectively a prequel to it. I don't know if you had that in mind, or if you're just reusing the name "Donny", but I like to think of these two characters being the same as the narrator and her offstage boyfriend in "Girl Talk".
and there's going to be a torn hymen (wherever it is, down there). A lot of bodily fluids are going to be transferred. Let's just hope Donny has a stash of condoms or Bev is on the pill.
Great first time story, and good luck in the Summer Lovin' contest.
The perfect combination of sweet and innocent mixed with downright hot.
A balance well struck.