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k like this one to
It was good keep them comeimg
Another great chapter!
Glad to finally get to read more about the lives of Charlie and Miley! Can't wait for more! Keep up the great work.
Glad!
I am very glad you have decided to continue telling the story of Charlie and Miley's lives. You are very good at crafting plots and characters that are entertaining and captivating. Thank you.
YEAH!
glad to see you are continuing with the series. very good writing. Keep up the good work
Meh
This story has been drifting for a while. Brian needs to man up and choose a girl. Stacey and Sam need to quit the lame ass cat fight and realize being with Brina won't make them happy - growing up will, and Miley - hell, man... Miley needs to stop being a whiny, immature little jealous bitch.
If you didn't do good sex, I'd have quit long ago because your characters need to see a shrink.
Good, but could be better...
As much I love this series, I agree with the other poster that the Brian thing has been dragged out too long. He either needs to man up and pick one or both girls should just dump him for being a pussy. Enough with the will-they-won't-they. Other than that, the story is good. It's nice to see the passion/romance between Charlie and Miley. They are definitely the perfect match.
Btw, love the fact that Charlie sneaked that Gwen Stacy business underneath Miley's nose. I cannot wait until she finds out the meaning behind it.
Makes me remember why I liked Beauty & the Geek so well!
The story just keeps ambling long! Yes!
Sorry
But you either need to straighten DUDE aka Brian out or kill him off; he is just dragging the story down, he is so useless and imature one begins to think he is lucky to be anything more then 10 years old
Brian's fine
What he needs to do is delete your comments.
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