Making Him Watch

Loving Wives?

Pick up a random guy at a bar and fuck him? Tie up your husband and gag him? Loving Wives? Really? Hope she gets a gift that keeps on giving. No Loving Wife here. 1* This was bad.Non Consent or even Non Erotic. Divorce the bitch and move on John

REVENGE!!!!

I hope John reads Literotica "Loving Wives"category, there are some very inventive and awesome examples of vengeance on a cheating whore, he should get some great ideas to get even with both of them. Sorry gave it a 1*, John gets revenge in another chapter and it gets a 5*

Better sex but....

The sex was better in this one but I don't particularly like the humiliation stuff. If that floats your boat that's ok but only 2 * from me.

Just figured I'd say...

Hey - if the story isn't for you, that's completely understandable. Admittedly, putting the story in 'Loving Wives' was a bit of a naughty laugh for me. That said? The description tells you it is really a cheating wife story. If you read that, and clicked anyway - you're choosing to read outside your taste. If you DIDN'T read that and clicked anyway - sorry mate, you're to blame.
Again - apologies if the story wasn't to your tastes, but the description sets it up as a cheating spouse story.

Mr Author

I do not think the issue with your story is about cheating wives. Its the BDSM/Non Consent /Humilation aspectt that does not appeal to me. Cheating wives stories are obviously commonplace in this genre. Tieing up your husbnd and gagging him is not.Personally I don't find that at all erotic so I will not read you in the future.

Totally sucks...

I fail to see how anyone could find this entertaining. Women who do this are pure evil.

alright

look, people, its crap that the story is being so negatively criticized. The description clearly states what the story is about, and you read it anyway. That said, check out the lovely spelling and grammar. At least you can read it, which is more than can be said for the quite a few of the stories here. No then/than bs and all. I'm glad I read it, it shows me that people are actually literate. GOOD JOB :)

The Evil Wife

The wife certainly has an evil side to her.
Question is once she tormented her poor suffering wimp of a husband.
Will she give her husband a FFM !
It may it will end up with both woman fucking the husband with strapons

1*

Well like said before, loving wives is going downhill. The stories are nothing but trash. The erotica has long disappeared in these tales. Let's hope at least one good story will be posted soon. These stories are written for a select few, unfortunately that leaves most of us out.

Pathetic faggot

Just kill yourself. Total crap from a weak coward. Writer is either a faggot or a cunt who hates husbands. stop writing this shit and go away

Good story

Forget the story police. This was a very good effort for those who like the subject.
I don't really understand why some of these people read stories they know they will not like and then criticize them. At least you're making an effort.

husband makes her watch as he responds to her actions

first he shoots each of her ankles
then both her wrist
then both her knees
then both her elbows
then.....
finally one thru each breast

Another sick fuck! Yay!!! It seems to be the only place sick fucks go these days. There are way too many cuckold stories and I know for a fact that very few people like them. Hence the scores always in the 2's! Go back to fetish sicko!

Jeeze

You would have to be pretty fucked up to get off on this shit. Someone would really want a husband or wife or a marriage like this? Nobody I know.

a real man

would either dump your cheating ass, or blow both you and your fucktoy straight to hell.

This slut needs to be removed from the gene pool, she is absolutely worthless...

This was just another bullshit cuck slime effort.

Whoa, she really hates John, doesn't she.

After all, she demeans and sexually castrated him, and even though he probably got off on it, she didn't do it die mutual pleasure but because hurting her his and turns her on.


How fucked up is that? John should do the smart thing and just get divorced.

Why Be Married

If you hate him so.

What would John do to me after I untied him?

Incomplete. You never answered that question. Nowhere in this story did I get the feeling that John wanted to be a participant. I got nothing against cheating stories, loving wives is mostly about cheating. I don't like the wimpy ass cuckold type tales which seem to dominate this genre and reading the comments on most of these stories I'm not alone. I think what irritates most readers is that there is no ending. One is left hanging. Sex games between a couple is not unusual but this wife carried it too the extreme. I don't think John would have gone along with this, but since the writer chose not to tell us, we will never know. Writing is okay but the story left one dissatisfied. Maybe this writer should stick with romance. (ML)

She would be sooo fucking dead.

But why am I getting worked up, I have never met a woman who would do this shit, this was in the head of some sick bi guy who thought it would be erotic, hint, its not!

john's revenge

as soon as she took Daniel in her pussy, john finally managed to slip the ties and walked quietly out of the room..... he had bought a gun unbeknownst to his wife, and returned a moment later. he fired twice, the first bullet blasting through the nutsack of the man fucking his wife and into her dirty cheating cunt. the second bullet silenced their screams of pain as it entered through the bastard's back and blew his heart out before entering the whore's chest and mangling her heart beyond all repair. they died in pain and will remain in hell together forever. when the police came after the neighbors called 911, john explained himself and was taken into custody. since his wife was such a narcissist, she had a camera recording everything. it was ruled justifiable due to the cruel nature of the husband's torment, and john was free to go since it was a crime of passion.

unbelievable

Firstly....good story....well written. One little blip in a sentence where it should have been "too" instead of "to". As to the other comments ....they aren't able to get past their morality issues to give a proper critique of this submission. I will never understand people like that. Why read it if you don't like the subject matter? ?
5 stars.

Nitro Are You Stupid or What?

How do you know if you like a story unless you read it moron, Listen, Cheating wife stories are expected in the category. What is not expected or appreciated based on the scores and the comments are having the wife tie up her husband and gag him, Sorry dipshit that belongs elsewhere. Reading tags does not do it. Jesus what planet are you from?

Excellent Story!

Granted, this story explores a fairly unusual relationship that may offend some people. However, it is clear ahead of time that both the wife and husband have agreed to this arrangement. Thus, this is very ethical and respectful of their relationship.

The story is nasty, exciting, full of suspense and well written. Good job! My wife and I are not into the life style expressed in this story. However, it was very erotic for both of us!

Why

Why would a wife want to "diminish" her husband.....I am not into cuckolding, but I do read Good Husband because of the relationships he develops in his stories...in this story there is no loving relationship, just humiliation and degradation. Nothing here to enjoy!

Just another sad cuckold story

It amazes me that the women always seem to tell the story from their point of view and assign the husband no spine, pride or self respect. I've always thought that Laptopwriter had the correct response to having a wife that wanted to cuckold her husband. I suggest you read "He said no" for the only possible response to some women, thinking she was dominant, that was intending to cheat on her husband. This story was unbelievable tripe.

Just clarifying

Re enamoredwriter.

I like cheating wife stories, even tried to write a couple but I just didn't buy into the humiliation in this one.

Simply awful

What would the wife's reaction be if husband tied HER to the wall and had sex with a sweet young thing? If you can't flip the genders and make the story work, it is 1* (and in this case repugnant).

I think he wrote this to piss people off.

He and his boyfriend are reading the comments, pinching their nipples and laughing. I'll just make sure I skip this writer from now on. You go girls.

re: Nitro's comment

To give a story like this 5 stars is an insult to the writers that post erotic stories in this category. But then coming from the wimp ass cuckold lovers like Nitro it's no surprise.As to the morality charge, what a fucking laugh. Do you really think I'm concerned about morality on a porn site. Not likely, but I am pissed off at all the fetish elements, interracial and non-consent thrown into this category. 1* for a non-erotic story.

This is Crap!!!

Mate!!

More of the same...

I am a submissive women who is dominated by my husband, so I can comprehend a couple playing like this. But I can understand that the vast majority of men will hate this story, because they have no interest in submitting to a woman.
The story was brief and told from the point of view of the dominating woman, who would come off as a cold fish to these men, as there wasn't a whole lot from which to glean the depth of her love for him in this short scene.
But a man who enjoys this kind of attention (getting tied up, being told what is going to happen, being humiliated by being exposed in front of the other man, and having the other man add his verbal humiliation) or lack of attention (being ignored and having to watching her play with another man) from such a woman, even if she appears to behave cruelly, would find it exciting, and the big clue here is his erection, guys.
Another commenter mentioned GoodHusband's stories, and while if you read each of his series, you come to understand that these couples really do love each other, no man who has negatively commented here would be able to stomach the treatment of those men by their wives or girlfriends. You have to be a submissive man to truly appreciate them (preferably a masochistic, voluntary cuckold).
Sadly, people just feel the need to criticize stories that they hate, not because the writing is poor, but because they dislike the kinds of sexual activities involved, despite being warned beforehand. This is what goes on on the internet today; people trashing others' lives to allow themselves to feel superior.

To The Last Commenter

You lady are a moron. This was pure evil on the wifes part. Regrdless of what you say tieing up your husbnd and gagging him is not erotic to most people except for a few fetishists such as yourself. Its obvious you are in the minority based on the scores and the previous comments. Go bck to Fetish where you belong

Just read this . . .

And I have a few thoughts not already mentioned in other people's comments. Writing was not bad, but the title should have included "Ch. 01," so the reader can decide to wait for all parts to be posted before reading. In some cases (i.e., "When We Were Married"), the chapters were posted weeks or even months apart, and it was tough to follow the story without going back to reread previous chapters. So I would submit the author should consider proper labeling of the chapter number in future multi-part stories. Also, "I Made Him Watch" does not automatically mean bondage -- it could have been blackmail or bargaining, or fulfilling a lost bet or promise (i.e., to get a FFM threesome fantasy you need to let me fuck a man in front of you first). So the title does not automatically mean bondage -- one needs to start reading to learn that.

That said, I have another concern. It would undoubtedly take an hour or two for our "heroine" to go to a club and pick up a random guy to fuck in front of husband John. Even though this is just a story, the idea of leaving a "loved one" (or anyone, for that matter) tied and gagged without supervision for that length of time is repugnant, no matter one's fetish or fantasy. John could have choked and died while she was out. Would that dampen her panties? What if her bindings resulted in damage to hands or feet, so John became permanently disabled, would that turn her on? A man being hanged to death usually has an erection -- does that means he enjoys being killed? Some men's erections are due to threats to their manhood and relationships but not necessarily because they really want what's happening to be happening.

I mention the above because sometimes people "try out" what they read, not realizing bondage play requires great care and responsibility, not blind luck or chance. The bound person has placed their trust in the binder; it must never, ever be taken lightly. There needs to be a "safety signal" if a person is gagged, like a dropped handkerchief, as the whole scene needs to be consensual. If not, then we are dealing with more than even BDSM here -- it is Nonconsent/Reluctance. I certainly don't think this story should be in LW, no matter how one plays it.

I might be the only one

I admit I liked it and hope for more chapters. I want to read how she get stretched and filled with thick long cock. How she is pumped full of the strangers thick hot seed. Then the interaction between cuckold and wife after. Did he enjoy? We know he is humiliated. Does he eat her clean then fuck her stretched out pussy? Or is the next step, chastity and panties for wimp cuckold?

Enjoy

What is wrong with watching your wife get her cunt filled with someone else cock and she enjoys it. It is nice to see her treated well and seeing the cock slowly filler her cunt. I have scene my wife get her cunt filled many times and as soon as he leaves we have a great time.

Yes I eat her just fucked cunt.

To The last Commenter

Are you tied up with a gag in your mouth? If so your a moron.Maybe you will choke on your gag.

To Vulcan (and anyone else concerned with safety):

Fair point, Vulcan. This story isn't intended to be an introduction to bondage play or to offer ideas to pursue, and I rather hope no one takes it that way. Real interactions generally involve more subtly, trust, and care (none of which should be discarded in a hasty moment of lust).

And to others:
If you don't like it - my apologies. By all means, vote your reaction. I had a conversation with a married friend about her darker desires, and developed this story based on them. It isn't a true story (although the leading lady is modeled on a real person to a point). It's a fantasy that many wouldn't desire to act out, and few will find fitting to their tastes. If you like it - I'm glad. If you don't, then instead of bashing the content: please voice your disapproval by voting and move on to a story you'd rather enjoy.

Oops, good point Vulcan...

I better get down the basement and check on her bindings.

The fact we're even discussing this in LW is wrong. WRONG.

Take it to another category or forum, please.

Submissive

This points out that the submissive partner in any relationship is at the beck and call of the dominate partner. However she showed very poor judgment leaving him alone while she was gone if the house burned down killing him for any cause and she was at the club MURDER !! It was well written other than that. very sensual too. John is the submissive so he asked for whatever the dominate partner wants unless they discuss this beforehand and write down limits put in place stop words. If the limits and stop words are not there the relationship will end.

you can't utter a safe word if you're fucking gagged moron!!!!!!!

loved it

This is a great start and i want to read part 2, especially with details of the feelings of both after the fuck.

S C V

UNO ESTRELLA