Seductive Scents: Sample A

Great start! Very interested in seeing where you take this. :-)

MInd control

love the way she is aware of her own inability to do anything but cum to slake her arousal, should develop this theme as you write more about the lovely Anna

Too short

Good start. Has possibilities.

Rushed Ending

The beginning was detailed and really got me going, but just as I got into it, I feel you had to rush out the door, typed up a quick ending and hit submit. Would love to hear a more developed ending or more on other "test subjects."

Next chapter?

feel like there is much you left our and are deffinitly going ot need to put in. good read, rushed ending, good detail on lots of other things but more detail on her masturbation and her blowjob wouldn't go amiss