This is building up to some real intensity. I love the tension between Gwen and Natalie - and the budding explorations with Tim show how everyone is winning from Gwen's opening up. Keep up the good work
She could be married to either Gwen's or Tim's brother.
Didn't notice the issue at the time, and since it didn't spoil my enjoyment of a top-notch story I'm not motivated to go back to find whether there's a real plot glitch or not.
I had read the first story a couple of months ago and it didn't grab me at the time. Just the other day I reread it and then read part 2. Suddenly I was addicted. I started reading and became fascinated with the story. Very well written and entertaining. Especially love the relationship that grows between Gwen and Natalie. I think these stories personify what 95% of married men wish would happen to their wives. I've read the first ten and will continue to read the rest. Great work. Please keep it up.
English
Awesome story...sexy, erotic and funny as hell. Look forward to seeing more from you!!!
Loving this gem
This is building up to some real intensity. I love the tension between Gwen and Natalie - and the budding explorations with Tim show how everyone is winning from Gwen's opening up. Keep up the good work
Problem
How can Natalie be a sister-in-law to both Gwen AND Tim?
sister in law?
She could be married to either Gwen's or Tim's brother.
Didn't notice the issue at the time, and since it didn't spoil my enjoyment of a top-notch story I'm not motivated to go back to find whether there's a real plot glitch or not.
Love the progression
I really enjoy following Gwen's journey of self-discovery. Her future holds much promise. The Lady and the Slut are fun, too. Great visuals.
Love the innocence
As for the sister-in-law aspect, you probably missed where it was mentioned that Natalie is married to Gwen's brother, Adam.
Nice
The ending was beautiful, I felt the love...
Still following
Just the right pace, to the point without being rushed.
Great
I had read the first story a couple of months ago and it didn't grab me at the time. Just the other day I reread it and then read part 2. Suddenly I was addicted. I started reading and became fascinated with the story. Very well written and entertaining. Especially love the relationship that grows between Gwen and Natalie. I think these stories personify what 95% of married men wish would happen to their wives. I've read the first ten and will continue to read the rest. Great work. Please keep it up.
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