All Comments on 'Impregnating my Sister-N-Law'

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jacks66jacks66over 10 years ago

A great fucking story

jacks66

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
what a piece of shit story

Waste of 30 seconds of my life

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
not incest

it would be nice it the idiot author understood that a "sister-in-law" does NOT qualify as incest ... this story was a complete waste

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

looking forward to the next chapter

LechemanLechemanover 10 years ago
Story Was Ok

There were quite a few grammatical errors throughout the story thus needing a good proof read before submission. I am seriously beginning to wonder if a lot of the male authors on this site have size concerns with their family jewels hence the need to express to their readers the size of a character's cock. Each to his own I suppose.

Story was okay, just lacking in reality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
rasist

would like to get his wife and sister-in-law on the end of my British cock they would both appriciate being well and truly know they have been BRITISH fucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh Please...

Pretty stupid...

prettywiccanprettywiccanover 10 years ago
i liked it

idk why cheat on his great wife tho the rape was amazing but still isn't he kinda greedy keeping her

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
You are one sick fucker

You sould be locked up for writing this

cosimo14cosimo14over 10 years ago
Incest ?

How about this being the the wrong category. Non Consent would be better. They are not blood related.

chris73170chris73170over 10 years ago
liked it

if yasmine is such a prude maybe next time have her wear pantyhose over to her brother in laws house.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Read this before..

It was shit then, it's shit now, and it will always be a shit story; get some fucking talent, you worthless pile of talentless dogshit

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WTF

You call this erotic? 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Turn off at the start

As soon as you said "raped her" I stopped reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This was absolute CRAP!!!!!

Need I say more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just awful.

Just a poorly written and awful story.

obeyobeyover 10 years ago
twas nice

Fucking story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hey DUMBASSES!!!

To all the 'haters', READ THE TAGS FIRST before you read a story. Why do you think they have the warnings for....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
seek help!

Violence is not a turn-on for well adjusted people; either it was written this way for effect (in which case it should have been in "non consent") or the author thought it both appropriate and arousing - in which case, SEEK HELP!

StickyStuffInMeStickyStuffInMeover 10 years ago
Very Similar to Ridemypole

I think the story's hot, but it's using the same character names and nearly the same settings as the stories written by Ridemypole.

joodlejoodleover 10 years ago
Cheesy but hot

Once in a while, I will read a less than Shakespearean level sex story because bottom line, they can be fucking hot. I love how Mike beats her around and yells at her. The forced impregnation always puts me over the top too. Yes, the dialogue is a bit much and essentially a combination of smut and cliche, but the abrupt, intense, unrestrained content is inevitably going to get me wet. Those who have nothing positive to say, go find another fucking series to read. If you want quality, go and PAY for quality.

KY XtianKY Xtianover 10 years ago
Bad story all around

This isn't an incest story, its a rape story. And a very poorly written one at that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
BRILLIANT !

IT WAS AWESOME !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Brilliant plotting..NOT

Sometimes simple is good.

Characters are so comic book that it throws me off. But I did read comic books.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hold on isn't this on here twice?

https://www.literotica.com/s/making-yasmini-my-slut?page=3

Evil_MonarchEvil_Monarch10 months ago

he should have made her clean the room herself. why the hell did he do it himself?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

learn the difference between catty and caddy. And maybe another 500 simply mistakes made in this series.

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