by ILuvRidingYasmin
it would be nice it the idiot author understood that a "sister-in-law" does NOT qualify as incest ... this story was a complete waste
There were quite a few grammatical errors throughout the story thus needing a good proof read before submission. I am seriously beginning to wonder if a lot of the male authors on this site have size concerns with their family jewels hence the need to express to their readers the size of a character's cock. Each to his own I suppose.
Story was okay, just lacking in reality.
would like to get his wife and sister-in-law on the end of my British cock they would both appriciate being well and truly know they have been BRITISH fucked
idk why cheat on his great wife tho the rape was amazing but still isn't he kinda greedy keeping her
How about this being the the wrong category. Non Consent would be better. They are not blood related.
if yasmine is such a prude maybe next time have her wear pantyhose over to her brother in laws house.
It was shit then, it's shit now, and it will always be a shit story; get some fucking talent, you worthless pile of talentless dogshit
To all the 'haters', READ THE TAGS FIRST before you read a story. Why do you think they have the warnings for....
Violence is not a turn-on for well adjusted people; either it was written this way for effect (in which case it should have been in "non consent") or the author thought it both appropriate and arousing - in which case, SEEK HELP!
I think the story's hot, but it's using the same character names and nearly the same settings as the stories written by Ridemypole.
Once in a while, I will read a less than Shakespearean level sex story because bottom line, they can be fucking hot. I love how Mike beats her around and yells at her. The forced impregnation always puts me over the top too. Yes, the dialogue is a bit much and essentially a combination of smut and cliche, but the abrupt, intense, unrestrained content is inevitably going to get me wet. Those who have nothing positive to say, go find another fucking series to read. If you want quality, go and PAY for quality.
This isn't an incest story, its a rape story. And a very poorly written one at that.
Sometimes simple is good.
Characters are so comic book that it throws me off. But I did read comic books.
https://www.literotica.com/s/making-yasmini-my-slut?page=3
he should have made her clean the room herself. why the hell did he do it himself?
learn the difference between catty and caddy. And maybe another 500 simply mistakes made in this series.