All Comments on 'Fate Steps In'

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juanjsojrjuanjsojralmost 20 years ago
great story

great story I like it alot it was nice that they found each other after being apart it was kind of short but good

aysa69aysa69over 18 years ago
nice

very well written and realistic. i enjoyed it very much, great job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great Work!

Wow. I've seen this story around for a while, and I kept puting off reading it. Now, I'm want to kick my self for it! This was great. Very realistic. I've got a brother out there somewhere... and now I have to look back and wonder if I've ever done him!! Good job!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
As I type this,there's a loving tear in my eyes.

This story is so very,very heart wrenching,it's making me,a grown man cry,I'm sorry to say.

It's beautifully told,& could happen to any of us,in this crazy World,that we live in.

That's why it's bought tears to my eyes,thankyou,a wonderful story,& very,very true I expect,as we read occasionally in our papers,of incredible liasons amongst siblings.

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
Really Enjoyed Your Story

This turned out to be one of the best short stories I have read on this site. Sibling incest is my favorite, even when it's unintended. Thanks for your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
The best Story I've yet to read!!!!!!!!!!

This is the first of your stories that I have read but by far the best of all that I have read in this Sight! ! ! !

AllthatiwantAllthatiwantover 12 years ago
Oh my

Very well done such a fantastic story I just wish it was longer

OldKingClancyOldKingClancyover 12 years ago
Short and Sweet

Very good story, could be longer but for what it is it's one of the best.

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 11 years ago
Excellent story

And I agree withe their decision!

sabra16023sabra16023about 10 years ago
Great writing

This is a great story & it can be true to life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Another one, an x rated movie, exists ........

For the life of me I don't know why is x rated, a short (30 seconds, tops, is filmed

in shadows) sex seen is very tastefully done !! Story is called " I found my mom"

I think... I just saw it yesterday and was driven to tears at the story, acting, pacing

and filming of it !!! It took place in Paris . You can view it on a free porn site called

XV ..... It is really worth your time to find and view it !!!! I do not want to say too

much about the plot and spoil it, especially the ending !!! Do not pay any attention

to the asses that dissed it, as they have no soul !!! I am a guy and it is extremely

rare for me to admit, I cried, but I did !! You see I was in the army in Europe

and know 1st hand, about grown children looking for their dads, who went

home to the U.S., either not knowing about them or...... To hear 1st hand

from some of the "kids", how sad and lost their stories are, was at times very

to hard to hear as a fatherless kid of 17 years old and so far from home ......

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 4 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhabited sex.

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