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by Anonymous09/14/13

Mmmm...

It felt like I.was there in the room, hearing the sounds and smelling the sex. Thanks for the detailed description. Now, do me!

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by Anonymous09/14/13

*You*

It's hard to get into these type of stories that use the word "You" to describe the main character. It assumes a lot about the reader; if the reader is male, it turns them off because they can't relate.

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