All Comments on 'You Blew It'

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jhollanderjhollanderover 10 years ago
Wow

That scene was very intense, and very hot. I loved how rough he used her, how turned on she became. Very nicely written too. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice

Short, hot, and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Don't

Just don't write anything else. You aren't good at it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yep

that story is hot as fuck

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