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by AngelaSaxon12/24/14

So, Ashson

There is a definite pattern to many of your stories, or of the ones I've read anyway - the girl always ends up enjoying and participating. Always! Maybe you should try writing one where that doesn't happen. In this case, for instance, she might be daunted by the idea of all the boys entering the changing room enough for the protagonist to get her towel away and start to have his way with her, but she wouldn't have to discover how much she loves it. He could even naughtily call the camera-wielding boys in at the end anyway, to enjoy the view. Whatever you'd like. But how about just ONE that doesn't follow that pattern?

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by Ashson12/24/14

Literotica rules say that she has to like what happens.
If she don't make it the story won't make it to the site.
I've had to adapt or kill a couple of stories to meet the rules.

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by AngelaSaxon12/28/14

Ashson, I don't think

...that is correct, is it? I've read plenty of stories on this site in the non-consent section which don't seem to involve that universal enjoyment.

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