All Comments on 'Becky's First Win'

She was riding a motorcycle?

back in my college days I took a poetry class or I should say the class took me... I will have to re read this one several times... This one has a LOT of underlining meanings... Great Job... I will wait to rate but it will be HIGH

Who is this low life whore married to? Lucky guy, not!

Well done! Very well done. The writing is stellar. The plot is excellent. Wouldn't have minded if there had been more descriptive, and hotter, sex. Doesn't detract a whit from the story. Definite 5 stars.

Now I gotta take a look-see to find out if you've published anything else here.

But it is more delightful than it is unusual!

Only quibble is that it seems to be Diva Division...I think she should win against All Cummers!

Written by a stupid man.

Racing has no place for whores. Even.motorcycle racing.