I admit it took me a while to connect with this story, but completely agree with @Inspector123 - i totally love it since the Earl gotten involved!
can't wait for more :)
Perfect, this was just perfect! The start of the chapter was just what I had been hoping for, Gabriel's perspective, he's just scrumptious! I do hope Marchland causes a bit of trouble in one of the at homes, it would be fun to see the Earl go off on one! I think your chapter development of the Earl is really making the story and the steady pace is just right. Excellent chapter as always, it's made my day.
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Anonymous09/12/13
Excellent chapter. I can not wait to read more!!
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Anonymous09/12/13
Superbly superior...
not many match goldeni's style and grace. She always hits just the right notes...and punches all the 'hot' buttons. Thank u, m'lady. Take care...today and always.
PS: U're always get 5*'s from me.
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Anonymous09/12/13
More please!
I love this story and check almost daily hoping to find the next installment! Please keep them coming as quickly as possible! So hot.
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Anonymous09/13/13
Satisfaction
God bless the story teller, for she is very entertaining. Thank you
But that was what was so good about it! I never expected Vivian to fellate Gabriel before the marriage; but I suppose being able to suck cock proficiently (in addition to a well prepared anus) should be part of every girl's marriage training!
I made the mistake of checking to see if this was up yesterday ... When I had guests visiting. It nearly killed me to have to wait to read it until today. SO worth the wait, though :). Thank you for a great chapter - it's good to see both characters so attracted to each other.
It took 15 chapters to get them together, but it was worth the wait! Very hot. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of her training.
We *will* get to see the marriage, I hope?
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Anonymous09/14/13
Looking forward
Looking forward to Ch. 16! Great story.
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Anonymous09/14/13
The anal focus on your story my dear is disapointing. I know I know, chain your slaves hang them upside down and give them enemas , but it's not the ultimate submission as I suspect you believe. Fill her pretty empty head and maybe she will be heavy enough to slide down to the Dark dungeon as I also suspect you wish. Of course not with this one, she's a waste of your talent.The rest of the bdsm stories here are rubish. If some of you insist on writing bdsm stories, at least do some research. There are a lot of forms of this sex life, but there are a few Golden rules that apply on all forms, like consent and Aftercare. For the life of me I don't know how female authors missed that one! I remember the good ol days it took 2 hours to download a bdsm picture, and another 2 to decode it, but at least it was worth it.
Forgive me my dear I don't have an account so it's simply E.
There is plenty of love and care in this particular story. Yes I find Angel's focus on anal a bit excessive for my taste, but they are her stories and neither you nor I should seek to change her creative license by anything other than votes and positive criticism. Your dismissive and frankly insulting attitude is especially repulsive because it is annonymous.
Dear E: I like anal (and yes I'm a woman) and therefore I do put a large anal component into my stories. It has nothing to do with submission. I just like butt sex. The anal play in this story is necessary because Gabriel wants to have anal sex after he's married and he would like Vivian to be prepared so that it's not ridiculously painful for her. Also... after care differs depending on the person giving it as well as the person receiving it. Vivian is quite happy with hers. For me... I prefer not to be touched at all for a little bit after doing something intense. Also... she IS consenting. It's reluctant consent at the beginning, but she likes what's happening to her and she continues to consent. She hasn't tried to run away and she's not going to. If you don't like it... maybe don't read to chapter 15 of a series.
Dear Baron: Absolutely! there will be at least one chapter of the wedding/marriage on Lit. =) You can check out my blog for more details. I have a total of 18-19 chapters planned so we're getting close to the end! Looking forward to what's coming up next =)
Dear EE71: Your comment made me laugh =)
Dear Everyone Else: so glad that you're enjoying it! I'm happy that Gabriel and Vivian are finally getting some time together =) And I'm looking forward to seeing where they take things in this next week... this story has already changed a lot due to some very constructive suggestions and requests made by reader comments and feedback, and I think it's the better for it. I hope you all continue to enjoy!
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Anonymous09/22/13
Please keep them coming!
I really don't understand those people that read 15 chapters to trash them afterwards. What a waste of time! Anyway, I am enjoying your series very much. I have been a fan for a while and I love finding new series that are complete because I hate to wait for the updates. Please keep them coming as soon as you can! Thanks :) V
Marriage Training is a brilliant story, and I am both titillated and satisfied with every chapter. I wasn't sure about having the Earl join in, as I rather enjoyed the training Mrs Banks was providing to Vivien, but you are managing this transition with me as smoothly as you are with Miss Stafford. Thank you!
English
Wow
Soooo HOT!!
The training has gotten
much more exciting and the story more fun to read since the Earl has gotten involved with the training. Nice job!
Wonderful
Can't wait for more, but all in good time. After all I am soooo ready for Stronghold!
Smoking HOT!!!!!
WOW!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. The build up and release in this chapter was perfect!!! One of my favorite stories on this site!
Fantastic reading!!!
It was so hot, so sensual, I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Great writing!!!
Hottest chapter yet!
I admit it took me a while to connect with this story, but completely agree with @Inspector123 - i totally love it since the Earl gotten involved!
can't wait for more :)
Perfect, this was just perfect! The start of the chapter was just what I had been hoping for, Gabriel's perspective, he's just scrumptious! I do hope Marchland causes a bit of trouble in one of the at homes, it would be fun to see the Earl go off on one! I think your chapter development of the Earl is really making the story and the steady pace is just right. Excellent chapter as always, it's made my day.
Excellent chapter. I can not wait to read more!!
Superbly superior...
not many match goldeni's style and grace. She always hits just the right notes...and punches all the 'hot' buttons. Thank u, m'lady. Take care...today and always.
PS: U're always get 5*'s from me.
More please!
I love this story and check almost daily hoping to find the next installment! Please keep them coming as quickly as possible! So hot.
Satisfaction
God bless the story teller, for she is very entertaining. Thank you
fav chapter so far. omg this was so hot. love your writing your so talented. can't wait for the next chapter. please hurry
My favorite story!!
I have read most of your stories and love this one. although I don't think there has been one that I didn't like. Write more soon!!!
Very un-19th century Britain!
But that was what was so good about it! I never expected Vivian to fellate Gabriel before the marriage; but I suppose being able to suck cock proficiently (in addition to a well prepared anus) should be part of every girl's marriage training!
Such a great chapter!
I made the mistake of checking to see if this was up yesterday ... When I had guests visiting. It nearly killed me to have to wait to read it until today. SO worth the wait, though :). Thank you for a great chapter - it's good to see both characters so attracted to each other.
Worth the wait!
It took 15 chapters to get them together, but it was worth the wait! Very hot. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of her training.
We *will* get to see the marriage, I hope?
Looking forward
Looking forward to Ch. 16! Great story.
The anal focus on your story my dear is disapointing. I know I know, chain your slaves hang them upside down and give them enemas , but it's not the ultimate submission as I suspect you believe. Fill her pretty empty head and maybe she will be heavy enough to slide down to the Dark dungeon as I also suspect you wish. Of course not with this one, she's a waste of your talent.The rest of the bdsm stories here are rubish. If some of you insist on writing bdsm stories, at least do some research. There are a lot of forms of this sex life, but there are a few Golden rules that apply on all forms, like consent and Aftercare. For the life of me I don't know how female authors missed that one! I remember the good ol days it took 2 hours to download a bdsm picture, and another 2 to decode it, but at least it was worth it.
Forgive me my dear I don't have an account so it's simply E.
E
Did you read the story at all?
There is plenty of love and care in this particular story. Yes I find Angel's focus on anal a bit excessive for my taste, but they are her stories and neither you nor I should seek to change her creative license by anything other than votes and positive criticism. Your dismissive and frankly insulting attitude is especially repulsive because it is annonymous.
A couple responses:
Dear E: I like anal (and yes I'm a woman) and therefore I do put a large anal component into my stories. It has nothing to do with submission. I just like butt sex. The anal play in this story is necessary because Gabriel wants to have anal sex after he's married and he would like Vivian to be prepared so that it's not ridiculously painful for her. Also... after care differs depending on the person giving it as well as the person receiving it. Vivian is quite happy with hers. For me... I prefer not to be touched at all for a little bit after doing something intense. Also... she IS consenting. It's reluctant consent at the beginning, but she likes what's happening to her and she continues to consent. She hasn't tried to run away and she's not going to. If you don't like it... maybe don't read to chapter 15 of a series.
Dear Baron: Absolutely! there will be at least one chapter of the wedding/marriage on Lit. =) You can check out my blog for more details. I have a total of 18-19 chapters planned so we're getting close to the end! Looking forward to what's coming up next =)
Dear EE71: Your comment made me laugh =)
Dear Everyone Else: so glad that you're enjoying it! I'm happy that Gabriel and Vivian are finally getting some time together =) And I'm looking forward to seeing where they take things in this next week... this story has already changed a lot due to some very constructive suggestions and requests made by reader comments and feedback, and I think it's the better for it. I hope you all continue to enjoy!
Please keep them coming!
I really don't understand those people that read 15 chapters to trash them afterwards. What a waste of time! Anyway, I am enjoying your series very much. I have been a fan for a while and I love finding new series that are complete because I hate to wait for the updates. Please keep them coming as soon as you can! Thanks :) V
When is the next chapter
When is the next chapter due
Next Chapter..
Was submitted a couple of days ago, should hopefully be out sometime next week depending on Literotica submission lag time.
Can't wait.........Thanks for the update.
Wonderful!
Marriage Training is a brilliant story, and I am both titillated and satisfied with every chapter. I wasn't sure about having the Earl join in, as I rather enjoyed the training Mrs Banks was providing to Vivien, but you are managing this transition with me as smoothly as you are with Miss Stafford. Thank you!
Marriage training Ch 15
Wow The story grows ever more intense as the Earl joins in. I am really enjoying this story.
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