Guilt

Interesting

Please continue this. You've intrigued me and I want to learn more!

Good

Interesting so far....hope you continue but it can stand its own too.

Uhhhh...

Don't like Caleb as your protagonist.... There is difference between being a bad boy and being an asshole. Caleb is the latter. Stick with Red Cloak.

Loved it , hope there's another part

@didntseeuxthere

Of course Caleb is an asshole, he is the antagonist of the story, not the protagonist =D

Never Before

I've actually never come across a story quite like yours. I'm either blind or nothing else has ever seemed as interesting as this. I'd like to see where you go with this it's great and I love how you write

Can't wait for ch. 2

Hope you'll be posting it soon :-)

Sigh

I hope you'll continue it. I check now and then hoping to find a new chapter