Short, quick and to the point without being frenetic. I liked this tale of lust and love told from the female perspective. Need, desire and fulfillment mixed in with some good old-fashioned PDA--it doesn't get much better than this. I'm not sure if it technically qualifies as exhibitionism--up in the sky, shielded by a gondola--but no matter. I'm a huge fan of the semi-public quickie. Five stars!
It was a great story, for being so short. I liked all the passion. Also the description, of all the events that took place. But you have to tell me glynndah. Was this a true story? You told me some of them were true. That's pretty hot if it was!
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