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'You're so responsive'
'As our lips touched, I closed my eyes and let the softness of his lips caress mine, feeling myself go completely soft, except for one crucial part below the belt.' The chapter is nicely paced. Pleased you delved into the past and revealed more character relationships and history. '...but Jake was all man. I watched him wash his soft black locks of hair, his handsome face, his broad and muscled chest, which to my amazement already had a light dusting of hair (on) it, to his rippling six pack, down to...' Delicious erotica. Cute characters. The improvement in style is appreciated. Take an extra day to fix your errors before submitting your chapter.
more please!!
love this story. the main characters are just so sweet. can't wait for things to heat up should be spectacular. sex with love always is
problem getting ch 1
I'd like to check this out, but the first chapter won't show up just letting you know so you can check into it.
Beautiful
any story with love and romance always gets my attention real fast and this one was no exception. am really looking forward to reading the next chapter. love the story.
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