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What the hell was that? And also if you're going to have same sex relationships in your story, which has been strongly hinted at in this chapter, WARN your readers BEFORE they waste time reading something they have no interest in. 1*
good start
I liked the story it was a good opening chapter. So what if its about a same sex relationship. I hope the author puts another story out soon. I will be looking forward to another chapter
Romance is where you find it
I like what you've done with this story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter(s).
More PLEASSSSSSEEEEEEE
Please write more. a great start and we all want to know more about the story and characters. x.
too many times
there so many examples of an author submitting a story then never to be heard from again, please do not become one of those. its a nice start please continue.
please more!
This can be a great series,please write another chapter
no more?
will you be posting more? its a nice start.
Please writhe more i love this storie
This story shows quite the promise... but, if course, with only the obviously incomplete aspect of the one chapter, we have to hope for more.
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