Bus Stop Romance

Wonderful story!

I never expected this kind of story on Literotica. Very powerfully and emotionally written. Thank you!

Good story.

Nice to read a warm loving story. A good romance story doesn't need all the sex to make it great reading. Keep up the good work.

Outstanding!

Love your work. Great read. Look forward to more.5*s

Thank You!

You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to your next story!
Alan

This is the second of your stories that I have read.

It was as good as the first one. I will read the rest of your stories. Thank you for writing.

Great Feel Good Story*****

Thanks for sharing this very enjoyable story.

Bus Stop Romance

Such Good Story has to be expected from the author as has been the case of all other stories which I had the opportunity to read in the last few days. Hope continuation of the trend in all future works as well. KEEP IT UP. WISHING ALL THE BEST.

Well done

As a Cane, I hate to say it, but I enjoy your stories.

Brilliant!!

Your stories are really touching and make a great read. Can't wait for the next one!

Much better

Rick, you seem to have taken to heart the major criticism that I have seen, that of trying too hard and rushing your story. a much better paced and developed story, well worth 5 stars

Bis(or Ditto) to all that Chytown said

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Real enjoyable read

Read all your stories to date and 1 thing that stands out is all the dead parents by car accidents,lol.

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your stories with us! Alaska84

Well done; a perfect sample to follow!

I've observed that the people who read our stories here are looking for perfection, as a respite from the disappointments of real life. I can't think of a more perfect example than this story. Every aspect of it puts the reader's mind at ease. I could feel my mood improving with every paragraph. Not only that: the grammar, word usage, and spelling were perfect all the way through, which made the reading go smoothly. I enjoyed the story tremendously, and I'll re-read it every time I need a refresher course to improve my own writing.

Second reading

I read this story a few months ago. This second reading was just as enjoyable as the first time.

3rd

Well I see I read this story for the second time almost a year ago. It is still a very entertaing tale.

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I really like your non erotic and delightful romance stories.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

A Pleasure To Read

You nailed this one. Great story and it goes to show you how a non erotic story is an excellent romantic story! Thanks Rick.. Love you all! Bye. Greg.

Simply great!

I'm commenting on this story, but my comment applies to you and not just this story. This the third of yours that I've read and I really like your style and your stories. Now I like erotica as much as the next guy, but sometime it's just too much. Your work stands on it own with out excessive sex, just good writing and good topicsw. All the best to you man.

Thad

Short and Sweet!

No wasted words in this excellent story! Romantic ,with a dose of patriotism,makes for good reading! Well done! A 5+

Outstanding

What a great piece of story telling. Outstanding!!! Looking forward to reading more of your well-crafted stories. SF VET

Love

I love your stories! Great work! Please keep writing

Good tale

I have only one quibble with this good story. A Marine does not salute indoors unless he is under arms, as Patrick would not be in his home. Other than that, it's a great tale. Semper Fi!

Love romance stories

This was more of a love at first sight type of story. I like it. Keep it up.