All Comments on 'Ooo, Daddy'

by SlamDuncan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
excellent tale

This is an excellent father daughter tale with a great plot. Maybe you can make a series out of it. Good length. Thanks and 5 star vote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WOW!

That is the most unique story I've ever read. Tender, loving, and really HOT. Thank you.

MissFeatherclitMissFeatherclitover 10 years ago
The hits just keep on cumming

I've never read anything quite like this before--what a great experience you had. It was sweet, yet erotic as hell. Well done, Slam

islandicislandicover 10 years ago
5 Stars

Yes needs another chapter, still one daughter to go.

sassysuzazsassysuzazover 10 years ago
So sensual and erotic

Loved this story..so tender, lil innocent and Hot! I was wet the entire time. I need a Daddy like that. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow

I can only dream of having a daddy daughter experience like that I'm sure many girls fantisise about their daddies I wished mine would have been my first if it was as tenter as this story intead of some asshole who doesn't care about how u feel

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Again

All 4 of the stories were magnificent. These can go on and on. Another daughter... Needy friends of the girls. I wish I had young daughters again. Maybe I can borrow someone else's... You are now my favorite author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot

I really liked this story. I was hard nearly the whole time. Lizzie sure sounds like she is about 13 as she seems so childish and her body also makes me think she is very young. But she has to be 18 for legal reasons.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I really enjoyed the story and the perspective that was used! :)

...i didn't really like how Lizzie had sex though, using a vibrator to break her hymen instead of daddy doing it was kind of a turnoff, that and her getting on top for her first time instead of daddy driving. ...hell, didn't really need daddy there at all, just slap a suction cup dildo in the middle of the floor and go at it :/

...so that was disappointing. The rest of the story was awesome though :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Pretty good over all! ....but using the vibrator to pop Lizzy's cherry, then her getting on top to fuck herself for the first time just turned me off and killed my boner, and the mood. Should have just bought her a suction cup dildo, slapped it in the middle of the shower, lubed it up and told her to do both by herself. Ugh. Oh well...

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