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Nicole's Job Interview

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by Anonymous

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by tnadnuder10/17/13

A few key mistakes...

...Took me out of it. Among them:

1] "While that it is definitely a great..."

2] "and said in an extremely sexy voice, murmured,..."

On the other hand, I would again suggest stories about Donna & some of the other secretaries you refer to.

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by 10/17/13

Thank you

Thanks for pointing those out. This was one of my first submissions I hadn't yet met my editor. I'll try to avoid those kind of mistakes in the future.

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by Anonymous03/08/14

Great work

Fucking hot!

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