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Simply Fabulous
Thank you, I loved every minute of this story and cannot wait for the next installment!
Sad
to see it end. Great story line. Great characterization. So patiently written. Amazing detail and clarity. After seeing trash like World War Z on the big screen, I have to say this could be infinitely better. Good Luck to you and keep writing!!
The End??
Love how you tied it up nicely for the Vampires. Do you have plans to continue this story into the Wolves side. Seems like another story arc is in place. Hope you continue on with writing!
awesome
this is the only story i felt like commenting... just amazing and enthralling fiction... thanks for the ride and please do continue the series
PS- Anna and Marcus rock!!!
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