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Little Annie Ch. 02

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by mel_pomene09/14/13

Yoy said - Hope you enjoyed. Stay tuned for chapter 3.

I did enjoy your story - very much and I am most definitely keeping my eyes open for Ch. 03.

Very well done, Innocent Princess 18, and welcome to Literotica. Five stars.

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by InnocentPrincess1809/14/13

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Chapter 3 was just submitted! Hopefully you won't have to wait too long.

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by Masterfuljim09/14/13

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Please keep writing
You have a short sharp abrupt style, but it is very readable.
My advice would be to slow down a bit and be a little more descriptive, but don't stop writing ...that is only mr opinion

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