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A Mother's Nightmare

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/03/04

this is the way that little girls think now

If only she was you would have a money making machine. lol

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by DanaQt10/24/04

Flow and meter

This really made me laugh. Reminds me of one of my girls. They sure can be silly at times- thinking and wanting to be all grown up.

The problem with this piece was the meter,which caused problems with the flow. It needed to be consistant all the way through.

Never to hurt and only to help.
Dana

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by thedogman7700401/26/05

Same Here

That was one hell of a poem.
made me look at my own two girls,and look back on my other grown (always)daughter.
Had me cracking up.Dammnn good poem.

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by duddle14612/21/06

Mommie's little girl.

Mothers of little girls everywhere probably could relate a similar version of this cute little poem. I thought the illustration was quite appropriate for the verses. A cute little rendering
~ sure to bring a smile.

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by Amyfriend01/26/07

Cute..

very cute...but look at Britney now..she's taken on the role of a fat slutty pig

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Today's kids all want to be older. I remember being so young, the pleasures of living for the moment ~~ at least until the hormones kicked in and then the moment took on new meanings. Ahhh, to live those pre-hormonal days again...

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Today's kids all want to be older. I remember being so young, the pleasures of living for the moment ~~ at least until the hormones kicked in and then the moment took on new meanings. Ahhh, to live those pre-hormonal days again...

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.



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by Anonymous02/08/07

eye opener

It is really interesting! I learn something new in English!

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by tazz31701/08/12

KIDS GROW TOO FAST

with knowledge obtained. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Loso2203/13/16

Lol that's funny

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